You have made a really good start here and your new idea is a good one, for a well-chosen audience. Overall, this is a little brief and each slide could do with a bit more detail.
To improve: - go through and add details as necessary - sometimes you don't introduce the terms and content before you discuss it and it seems a little 'out of the blue' - ask me if you're unsure what I mean - link to relevant sections of the BCAP code, there are some - check you spelling, punctuation and grammar throughout and check that your font is the same size on each slide or that you zoom into it if it is a little small.
Reece,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a really good start here and your new idea is a good one, for a well-chosen audience. Overall, this is a little brief and each slide could do with a bit more detail.
To improve:
- go through and add details as necessary - sometimes you don't introduce the terms and content before you discuss it and it seems a little 'out of the blue' - ask me if you're unsure what I mean
- link to relevant sections of the BCAP code, there are some
- check you spelling, punctuation and grammar throughout and check that your font is the same size on each slide or that you zoom into it if it is a little small.
Ellie